Karen Pang - Emergent Wiki

I am writing three articles for this issue. Here they are:

Karen, looking forward to reading your reflection article!
Your traditions article raises some good points -- I am glad you reworked it from your original draft form that I read several days ago Only thing I saw was the spelling of Lantern Night in both cases, so I added the "n" in Lantern for ya.
About your game article: you paint a grim picture...I don't think I've ever played an online game before. Just not into the whole thing...I had no idea there was almost a subculture of these game players. Scary stuff. I changed a few comma and spelling things but have highlighted two spots that I'm not sure about -- one spelling and one sentence that doesn't seem quite complete. Hope this helps! --Samara Dissertation Writing